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Hachet Creative writing!!

 This is my creative writing activity for the book called Hatchet 

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As Brian was trying to fly the plane he saw the pilot and was sad for the pilot, he thought to himself “am I going to live?” Tears came rushing down as he thought about this question.

But then suddenly he stopped. He thought about his parents, would is Dad be waiting for him? Would his Mum be worried about him? Would his parents even care if he was missing? Would they forget about him? He was worried.

 When he was thinking about those things he calmed himself down as he was trembling in fear and shaking from the fear of dying.

He thought to himself “Think about positive thoughts not negative thoughts” which made him calmer and made him relax.

He looked at the pilot who was slowly getting paler and paler and he said to the dead pilot “I hope you have a good rest and you won’t feel any pain anymore” he said sadly. He got up and went to look at the view from the window, he looked up and down, He sighed “If I don’t make it I hope my parents don’t worry about me”

But of course they would worry about him.

He had to concentrate on where he was going and how to use the plane he was flying it but he saw a lot more buttons which could be useful for other things.

“Am I going to live?”..........